My essay:
Nowadays, fast food is a part of our lives. Although it becomes more and more popular, it’s not mean that it has many benefits and less drawbacks.
No one can negate that fast food brings many problems to people’s heath. Fast food has too much lipids, a type of chemical substance that not good to people. The more fast food they eat, the more lipit they add to body, they will become overweight or obesity and feel hard to do some works or exercises. Eating too much fast food also lead to high cholesterol in their bloods and causes some serious disease, heart-shocking is an example. This disease happened when people’s heart did not have adequate blood to give to other cells.
In spite of its disadvantages, fast food still becomes popular because it has some benefit. People who don’t have time to prepare their meals like using fast food because it’s easy to buy and supply enough energy for a long day, besides, it has an interesting taste. In addition, fast food is cheap and safety so it a good choice for busy people in some case. Recent studies show that eat a little of fast food every months can make people healthier and improve the appetite. Recently, many kind of fast food contain salad and some other vegetable, so it can provide some vitamins and minerals people’s body.
Although fast food has a lot of disadvantages, people have to admit that it have some benefit and become very popular now and their challenger is reduce the drawbacks and increase the benefit of it.
Sample IELTS writing #1