Friday, November 22, 2013

Causes of stress

Model answer:
Nowadays, stress has become more widespread in our modern life. A day with 24 hours doesn’t seem to be enough time for our busy life. As a result of this, many people are suffering from stress and in this essay, I will describe three main causes of stress which are careers, relationships and health.

The first main cause is careers, known as work and study. Today, the more development does live have, the more pressure at work do people have to face. They have to choose being jobless or working under pressure of which both lead to stress. Moreover, many people don’t have a good time management skill, so they have to live under the difficulty off balancing work, study and relaxation. In brief, people who pay attention on their career may become victim of stress.

Secondly, having a relationship benefits humans but don’t you know that failure in relationship is a reason of stress. The relationships could be among family members, friends, and colleagues. For example, parents don’t have enough time to spend with their children; friends have no respect or feeling jealous with each other. As a consequence, they can’t come after that complicated relationships, and stress.

Lastly, people may stress because off bad health. Physical exercises are good for reducing tiredness and increasing health but they often ignore them or they don’t have enough time for them.

In summary, there have been more and more causes off stress. So the only thing we can do is find the good way to reduce stress as much as possible. We should think positively and enjoy our life instead of stress.
Sample IELTS writing #3